Pitch Feedback

Today we pitched to the class for our idea. We feel it went well however could been better if we had finished our moodboard for "I'm good, I'm gone".

Feedback for Im good Im gone:

• I like the empty room idea.
• Detailed idea. Using the lyrics for inspiration.
• Lighting idea is good.
• Costume and props are possible.
• Dark clothe good contrast with white room.
• Could have different locations to keep interest.
• Empty room - good keeping it simple
• Could leave it ironic by leaving her next to the phone at the end.
• I like the idea of one location and i think if you keep it simple it will work
• I like the simplicity.
• Good ideas for camera shots and lighting.
• Hard to fit with the track.

Questions:

• where is the white room?
• what shot styles where you thinking of?
• costumes?

From this feedback we have learned that our overall concept may struggle to keep the viewers interest. We have also realised that we may need to re think the idea in terms of the white room as this may be hard to find. This idea was our second idea and therefore we did not spend as much time on it.


Feedback for No social:

• Like the concept of the dump and the girl in nice bright clothes.
• Costume sounds interesting.
• Camera work sounds good.
• Like the abstract idea.
• Quiet detailed ideas for the video.
• Getting the ideas from lyrics is a good idea.
• Nice idea.
• Good idea.
• Location could be difficult.
• Setting and mes-un-scene
• Clear idea
• Good description of the feel of the idea.
• Abstract.
• Clear concept.
• Urban.
• Set idea is very interesting.
• Angles + edgy.
• Realistic and possible.

Questions:

• Where's the dump?
• Construction site - how will you get this?
• How are you going to get scrap yard to film in?
• Relying on a dump - maybe bring your own objects?
• Where is the construction site?
• Where is it filmed?
• Who's acting?
• Just one location?

This feedback has made us confident that our idea will work. It is very positive however we also learned that we will defiantly have to think it trough a lot and make sure we have everything sorted before we go to location.